Pimp my writing!

Last updated: 15/11/2023
Contributor: Alison Powell
Pimp my writing!
Main Subject
Key stage
Category
Writing for purpose and audience: Creative writing
Resource type
Worksheet

Students look at a supposedly descriptive passage about a friend, and rate the writing using the 'snooze-ometer' before improving the writing using a number of suggested techniques.

The second page includes two examples of 'pimped' writing for students to comment on. The following writing activity asks students to describe a friend. As an alternative, this activity would work well for describing a character.

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14/03/2021

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12/06/2019

Very handy!

Charlotte Jacobs

11/09/2016

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14/03/2021

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12/06/2019

Very handy!

Charlotte Jacobs

11/09/2016

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