Just a few tweaks.
Took out Ďeyeingí and added an 'and' and an 'or'. Punctuation kept to a minimum;
perhaps it doesnít need any.
These I have liked,
Aerial photos of
Maps of towns Iíll never see
Water running over
Dew on spiders' webs
Open fires on a dreary night
Other peopleís bookshelves and
The tick of the kitchen clock
The feel of curved
The shine of polished wood
A hot shower on a
The smile of friends at the door
The smell from the hotdog stall
The expectation of a hearty meal
The memory of foreign sunset, or
An early morning view, and you.
PS ....and added an 'and' and an 'or'... Try saying that quickly. Has a nice rhythm.