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Steam

Tuesday, 8 May 2012 14:53:12

That’s been a useful way of comparing versions.  I’ve made these choices:

I can hear a sound from childhood

A mixture of machine and animal

I recognise a steam train

Getting closer, closer, closer…

At the level crossing, paused, eager

I turn the engine off

To hear more clearly the chuff chuff chuff

With a clank clank clank of rods

Choking clouds and cannon volleys

A black beast with glints of brass and steel

It really is a dragon monster breathing fumes

 

Now to polish it further…







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