Pimp my writing!
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Key stage
Category: Writing for purpose and audience Writing descriptive texts
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Contributor: Contributor 2631
Published: 29/08/2008
Updated: 11/05/2015
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Description

Students look at a supposedly descriptive passage about a friend, and rate the writing using the 'snooze-ometer' before improving the writing using a number of suggested techniques.

The second page includes two examples of 'pimped' writing for students to comment on. The following writing activity asks students to describe a friend. As an alternative, this activity would work well for describing a character.

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14/03/2021

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12/06/2019

Very handy!

Charlotte Johnson

11/09/2016

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14/03/2021

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12/06/2019

Very handy!

Charlotte Johnson

11/09/2016

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